peer editing

i have asked magen to do the peer editin gon my proposal. i did soo bacsue o know that she is avert imtellligent young woman and she could help me alot more than anyother student in our class bacsue she pays more atting and takes thigns more serious tha others. she found a few thing s wrong with the paper and i just have to make those changes and then give it to a teacher to edit.